One day a boy and his Father went hunting in the hills for deer. When they were driving up the hill he felt really ill. But his father said we are not going back so you will have to deal with it. So They went further up the hill and they saw a deer so the boy grabbed the gun and had a go at the deer. BANG! Then the gun shoots and the deer falls to the ground very quickly. Then the boy said I feel better now because I have shot my first ever deer. I love hunting.
great writing angus